Here is the beggining of one of my memory book chapters. Please give constructive critisism.
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**side effects may include extreme fun, high doeses of laughter, and fun filled memories. EAS Company Inc is not responsible for
overdoses on birthday cake, sunscreen, sand, or obsession of outdoor activites.
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hahaha!!
ReplyDeletethat has got to be the funniest thing ever.
i really like the part about the side effects. "overdose of birthday cake" Nice! lol
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This is clever!! I love it. :) Side effects made me smile. & I like your "iSummer.... Do you?" Cute. :)
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